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Thursday 19 September 2019

'Nothing is Complete'- A Review by Sir Rakesh Chandra

Thank you Sir for your valuable review for poem, 'Nothing is Complete'

Here's the review-
' The poet in this beautiful poem has tried to impress upon a simple philosophy of life.Since birth,a person grows with an inherent concept of oneness, thinking himself unique .This feeling of oneness gives birth to another dangerous feeling of "me"-a precursor to egoistic trends.Travelling kilometers in the journey of life carrying the baggage of oneness and me negatives the very purpose of life. Poet has rightly said that zero does not mean vacuum.It means fullness of life
So one should try to bring down his feeling of oneness to zero . Kudos to the poet for successfully weaving this philosophical portrait in the poetical format.
  Copyright@Rakesh Chandra. '




'Nothing is Complete' - A Review by Sir Balachandran Nair

Thank you Sir for your precious review of poem, 'Nothing is Complete'.

Here's the review-
'Poem is a complete picture of human life. All through length one travel, 'distance covered' we say is no distance... poet establish. Just our stance judge it as distance. One take along  oneself all along, no? Nothing leaving behind...except shit, spit, spoils, spillages of memories!
Kilometres left by one is soon taken by other. Just a chain of such events,  that is all. Circle made zero or zero made circle, we wonder. It could be zero , as what we carry is nothing but our body, head-weight....like circle carrying atom. Write is a retrospection.
Right is it's depiction.

(Exactly 100 words)
Balachandran Nair '



Sunday 15 September 2019

'Nothing is Complete' by Forum Shah

Here's my own Review of my winning poetry, 'Nothing is Complete'.

The poem, 'Nothing is Complete' by Forum Shah is about traveling of a soul. Simply, it describes about reaching destination, arriving at zero kilometer. Deeply, it explores the vanishing of ego, the 'Me' instinct, and the bliss of nothingness.
We reach our destination when we arrive at 0 KMS. Till the time, we are even a kilometer away while traveling on our spiritual path, we can't experience real bliss. When there is ego in us, that is, when we feel 'I am the only one, I am something' we always stay a kilometer away from our destination. The moment we reach zero, a zone of nothingness, is the moment of ultimate bliss which every individual yearns. So lets reach our destination. ✨
'Nothing is Complete' by Forum Shah



'Nothing is Complete' - A Review by Sir Rajesh Kumar Sinha

Thank you Rajesh Kumar Sinha Sir for reviewing the winning poetry, 'Nothing is Complete'.

Here's the review-
'#Nothing_Can_Be_Connected_With_Nothing#
A Review Of Forum Shah's Poem 'Nothing Is Complete '.

The great Indian poet Rabindra Nath Tagore has rightly propagated,'Ekla cholo re'.It means each one of us have dawned on the earth alone and the greatest truth is that we have to carry out the earthly responsibilities too alone i.e.'Me'.Roads, miles, kilometres are the means to go forward but which way to go is always an individual's decision.People believe that the word 'zero' has no value, but it's only 'zero'  that is complete.We try to be heroes in life following the style of 'zero'.From life to death the complete circle is zero.A person who achieves desired success in life is one who can connect nothing with nothing to bring out something concrete.The real hero of life is like the Phoenix who rises up from ashes to establish it's existence.
Undoubtedly,the philosophical overtones in this particular poem of Forum Shah echoes all these burning issues that we face in our everyday life. Courage, determination, individual gutts are some things that we need to inculcate in ourselves. Only then we can make our lives meaningful.Half hearted approach towards the mission of life will lead us to nothing.Our approach to the mission of life must be full-hearted and our efforts must be full- blooded.Only then we can connect nothing with nothing.The sense of revolution that Forum's this poem "Nothing Is Complete" contains easily reminds us of  the great revolutionary poet of the age of Romantic Revival P. B. Shelley. My hats are off to Forum Shah for such a beautiful creation of a realistic verse. '




Sunday 8 September 2019

'Nothing is Complete'- A Review by Monalisa Dash Dwibedy

Thank you to the eminent poetess Monalisa Dash Dwibedy ji for reviewing the winning poetry, 'Nothing is complete'

Here's the Review-

"My critical review of the poem 'Nothing is complete'
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In this vast cosmos, only the eternal void is permanent. Everything else is ephemeral.
We give importance to our thoughts , hold on to our ego and allow all kinds of negativity to impact us . But do we realize the fact that even the planet earth is as small as  a dot in this universe and we are all alive in the lap of nothingness ?

Do we realize that we are just like dust particles in this large cosmos ? With a little karmic energy we are born and the body is moving closer to the grave with each passing moment.
The day a human being truly realizes this,  he/she will be grateful to life and all life forms around . When this happens , the human life will blossom with truth and gratitude as the egoistic “me and mine” attitude will fall dead .

The poem breathes in the light of spirituality and advocates the importance of nothingness.
Only by becoming nothing , one can merge with the void , which is the only truth and the knowing of which is the ultimate bliss.
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I highly appreciate the honourable poet Forum Shah ji for bringing truth to light. It’s a gem of a poem .
I feel honoured to review it . "